Read the following application written by a class eight student. Work in pairs to decide why his English teacher has underlined some areas. Consider capitalization and the use of punctuation marks.

the head master

pogose high school

Dhaka sadar, dhaka

subject prayer for activating the school library
dear sir
with due respect, I would like to draw your kind attention to the fact that our school library has remained closed for a long time. The students of this school borrow books from the village library though that library has not a good collection of books. on the other hand, our school library has good books such as history of independence of Bangladeshencyclopedia britanica banglapedia and different english grammar books and dictionaries. in the last prize giving day you said you will make the school library functioning. We, the students, will be benefited if you take measures to open the library and make it running.
therefore we hope that your honour would be kind enough to take necessary steps to make the library useful for students
faithfully yours

Your most obedient pupil
Abidurrahman
class 8
roll No 10

A: Do you know why our English teacher has underlined some areas in the following application?
B: I've noticed the underlined areas. Most of them are underlined for capitalization and punctuation error.
A: So, let's try our best to make the underlined areas error free.
B: Ok, let's try.
The Headmaster
Pogose High school
Dhaka Sadar, Dhaka
Subject: Prayer for activating the school library
Dear Sir,
With due respect, I would like to draw your kind attention to the fact that our school library has remained closed for a long time. The students of this school borrow books from the village library though that library has not a good collection of books. On the other hand, our school library has good books such as History of Independence of Bangladesh, Encyclopedia Britanica, Banglapedia and different English grammar books and dictionaries. In the last prize giving day you said, you will make the school library functioning. We, the students, will be benefited if you take measures to open the library and make it running.
Therefore, we hope that your honour would be kind enough to take necessary steps to make the library useful for students.
Faithfully yours,
Your most obedient pupil, Abidur Rahman'
Class 8
Roll No. 10